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Alison H: Jerry, the thesis statement in your MLK was well written and the main points were especially strong throughout your writing, however the conclusion seemed abrupt. Take time to wrap up your ideas! Your second longer writing about your favorite place (family cabin) was stronger overall, mainly because of the examples you used. Your poem contains several great lines, for instance ... Jennifer, your poem is the strongest of your three writings .... Kerry,